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March 3, 2025 at 16:18 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #53087
Dimitar
ParticipantHaiku Sequence;
Beachwalkers at Sunrise
storm coming;
batten down the hatches and send
out your prayers!crossing the bridge;
swollen autumn river
lapping at our heels!waking abruptly;
the roar of rushing winds a thing
of my own body?small birds ebbing
and flowing with the tide;
beachwalkers at sunriseMarch 2, 2025 at 17:43 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #53028Dimitar
ParticipantRather than address your lines directly, Nico, I offer the following haiku sequence in response, which contain seeds of answers to the questions posited therein, at least imo.
The sequence was inspired in part, by Akira Kurosawa’s 1950 film, Roshomon, which can be seen here; https://myflixerz.to/watch-movie/rashomon-80101.8313070
The Winds of God
among the ruins;
even demons flee in fear
of man’s ferocity!a bandit’s proposal –
I’ll mend my evil ways
if you’ll marry me!passing by
the mountain of the dead,
everything is silentan abandoned babe;
I already have six,
what’s one more?the winds of God;
he who hears them becomes
the hound of heaven!February 16, 2025 at 13:02 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #52143Dimitar
ParticipantThe Friend
I’ve placed your feet
upon the path;
you only need to trustleave behind the world
to be and do the
things it mustsing the song of love
that lives deep within
your heartand call upon me
day and night for we are
never apartFebruary 15, 2025 at 16:59 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #52098Dimitar
ParticipantYesterday
Yesterday seems so far away,
In memories that lie deep.
Silent like the falling snow,
In a long and passionate sleep,
Slowly moving in rhythmic flight,
Into the mist and God’s surging tide,
As a wisp of gold in the velvet night
Where lies the dawn and it’s faded bride…Paul Twitchell; “Coins of Gold”
February 14, 2025 at 21:33 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #52048Dimitar
ParticipantThis was a disturbing poem, especially as a parent, to write, based on a true story as it is (the image of the first verse happened literally as told). But… I remind myself that for those of us who would “take up the plough”, obeisance to the subject matter / truth, for the poet, is all important. We are bound to follow our muse wherever it may lead, and not necessarily question or falter when difficult subject matter calls. A further reference was a family I know, who lost their daughter in her prime, and the devastation her passing wrought.
a child’s salty tears;
more precious than any
holy water!Father, Dear Father
Father dear father,
that seed you’ve sown;
The sun, the soil
and the rain will free it!
In no time at all,
that tree will be grown,
But I won’t be
here to see it.Son, my dear son,
in your sweet springtime,
The beat of my heart
and the black of my eye;
Who would deprive you
of your unstained prime,
And rob you of wings
yet to taste sky?Father, dear father,
‘twould be cruel deceit,
Were silence to remain
falsely enthroned.
And to regret forthwith,
a further conceit;
I cannot see farther
than the eye has shown!Son, my dear son,
be that as it may,
Were deception a bedfellow
I was able to bed.
As sure as the darkness
of night follows day,
I would choose over anguish,
To which I’m now wed!Father dear father,
that seed you’ve sown,
The sun, the soil
and the rain will free it;
In no time at all,
that tree will be grown…
But I won’t be
here to see it!Saturday 15 02 2025
January 31, 2025 at 14:39 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #51204Dimitar
ParticipantHaiku Sequence
Three New Kittens
funeral march;
the otherworldly drone
of bagpipesdown in the valley,
an old sheep’s carcass –
new life taking rootlate summer –
pods of green peppers,
slowly turning purple…tonight’s nocturne –
rushing water breaks
through a barrier!a carpenter hews wood,
a mason, stone;
I hew thin air!fields of floating hawks;
when did I leave that world
and enter this one?three new kittens –
children clapping hands,
way past their bedtime01 02 2025
January 27, 2025 at 20:45 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #50974Dimitar
ParticipantHaiku Sequence;
Morning Parley
fierce thunderclap –
a dream scurrying away,
never to return!living in mist;
a pair of swallows huddling,
not ready to fly awaylovers embracing;
last night’s tears forgotten
(till next time)morning parley;
my mantle of dewdrops for
a sliver of golden light?28 01 2025
January 21, 2025 at 22:58 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #50570Dimitar
Participant“A thousand half-loves must be forsaken to take one whole heart home.”
Rumi
January 21, 2025 at 04:21 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #50524Dimitar
ParticipantThis re-post is in reply to the images of samurai posted above by AHH;
A meditation on the “Way of the Warrior”. Events described are derived from the
Genpei War – circa late 12th Century in Japan, and specifically, the fierce “Naval
Battle of Dan-no-una” where the warring clans, the Minamato, aka the Genji, and
the Taira (t-EH-ee-i-ra), aka the Heike, fought their final battle. With the Minamato
triumph, the Shogun era (essentially military dictatorship) was ushered in to last for 700 years.https://www.artelino.com/articles/naval_battle_dannoura.asp
The Way of the Warrior
They fought like lions, paying their dues,
With no place to flee and nothing to lose.
Expecting no quarter, giving none in return –
The way of the warrior, of fire interned!By noon that riptide had begun to relent,
The fury of the Heike was all but spent;
The drunken tiger lay on the seabed –
His fleet in disarray, the Emperor dead!“A fortress I’ll build, a sturdy redoubt!”
The Empress mother swore at her army’s pullout;
“Where the mountain meets the waters that churn –
At far Kobe we shall adjourn!”As night closed in on that battered old quay,
A company of horsemen had gathered at the scree;
Nestled in that bluff and surrounded by sea –
That demon lay hobbled for all to see!When fire began to rain from above,
The fates foreswore that labour of love;
Neither rain, sleet nor hail could begin to quell,
The flames that engulfed the citadel!The Taira elite once again stayed fate,
Scooped up by their armada anchored in the strait;
But the Genji and the Heike would once again meet,
In the waters off Shikoku in dawn’s red heat!They fought like lions paying their dues,
With nowhere to run and nothing to lose.
Expecting no quarter, giving none in return –
The way of the warrior, of fire interned!Holding him close in her watery descent,
Through the bodies and the blood and the excrement;
That jiji maddened and the boy foredoomed –
His breath expelled, his life consumed!By noon that riptide had begun to relent,
The fury of the Heike was all but spent;
The drunken tiger lay on the seabed –
His fleet in disarray, the young Emperor dead!As night closes in on those forced to flee,
Ill omened or cited by destiny;
A samurai true, when called to the task,
Does not hesitate, nor does he ask…Drunken Tiger: samurais were referred to as drunken tigers, ie; drunk with righteousness (here referring to General Tomomori, who, mortally wounded, tied an anchor to his waist and lept overboard.
jiji: an affectionate term for grandmother, referring to the Emporer, a boy of six, and the moment his grandmother committed them both to a watery grave, death being preferrable to shame.
scree: a rubble of stones at the bottom of a cliff
“That demon lay hobbled”: this is a reference to the great fortress built by the Taira, “furrowed into a mountain and surrounded by sea”, which, in spite of a violent storm, lit up like a bonfire after the young general Yoshitsuné rained flaming arrows onto the fine woodwork of its rooves, ramparts etc.
The final stanza refers to the great Minamato general, Yoshitsune, who, having bee the brilliant strategist behind the Minamato victory, was then condemned to death by his elder brother, Yoshitomo, to death. Yoshitomo would go on to become Shogun.
Yoshitsune fled with his family, (he had taken a Taira noble as a wife, hence the decree from the Shogun), and, seeing no chance of escape, murdered his entire family, before committing hara-kiri himself. And all this before the age of thirty!
I couldn’t resist adding this reply from ioan, not to aggrandize myself, but to hear his voice again;
ioan; What a history poem, Dimitar… And your explanations as a crown to it…beautiful! Dimitar as I told you, you have a great talent, your poetry will be better and better.
January 13, 2025 at 18:24 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #50086Dimitar
ParticipantCome to Me, Love
Come to me, love, I’ve hungered for you;
All through the night and the morning, too.
Through the afternoon haze and the call to prayer,
My heart it is broken, my soul laid bare.Down in the compound, the mission bells ring.
The angels they gather as the choir it sings.
Remember Beloved, Thy guiding light;
My eyes have been wounded, I’ve no longer sight.Come to me, love, wherever you roam,
Come gather me up and carry me home;
My knees have been hobbled, my body rent –
I understand now all that you meant!Down in the town they’re weaving a thread;
“Some faerie or demon ran off with his head!”
Still others are saying, “He turned and he fled –
He got cold feet on his way to be wed!”Come to me, love, I’ve hungered for you,
All through the night and the daytime too.
Remember Beloved, Thy loving care;
My heart it is broken, my soul laid bare!January 8, 2025 at 20:51 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #49827Dimitar
ParticipantThe Contemplative
the light of reason
dispels the darkness of night
enveloping soulmountains of passion;
the heart must become as
firm as a diamond!lopping off the branches
and cutting through the roots
of the tree of evil;
the sword of wisdom!the contemplative;
scattering the clouds that veil
the celestial light of the moonneither gold nor jewels
sway the man who is master
of his destinyJanuary 7, 2025 at 12:12 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #49732Dimitar
ParticipantThe Angel of Love Comes With a Sword
O’ seeker,
first the foothills
and then the lofty heights!purge thy thoughts,
and thy heart will follow
and show you the waymake love thy master,
and unburden the soul
of unwanted effectsthe truth within
must be found and activated
before miracles can occurcreate and live by
thy own law, then live
wholeheartedly!be sincere,
for the Angel of Love
comes with a sword!January 5, 2025 at 13:59 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #49616Dimitar
ParticipantWhat Will It Be?
what will it be;
fear or love?
it’s up to you!there are those who build
and those who destroy;
be a builder and not a destroyer!the golden heart;
dispelling darkness as it
lights the way for allthe key to understanding
the Spirit of Life; letting go
and letting God!dreaming your dream;
building the bridge to your outer world
one day at a timean invisible summit
on an invisible mountain,
only you can see!healing depends
upon the individual;
how conscious is Soul?one with the one
within the one; your atoms
teach my atoms!January 2, 2025 at 11:53 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #49455Dimitar
Participantwashing the mountain,
a colourless drizzling rain,
summer hazeawake yet asleep,
a sequence of guttural croaks and caws;
crows talkingwhitish clouds,
brushed away by an infusion
of stormy purples and greensblack cormorant,
alighting on spindly windswept trees,
azure seawithin my despair,
a strange ebullience;
capricious skyresplendent;
a sea eagle circles high up above
me and my concerns!December 31, 2024 at 19:24 in reply to: The Cornucopia – Art, Music, Poems, Creative Stories, Myth, & Glory, 29.11.24 #49371Dimitar
Participantand when,
on that fateful day, the
question had been posed
to all of God’s creation, from
the depths of mud and fire,
to the arc of the Empyrean –
“Who hast forgotten?”,
a tiny voice spoke up;
“Not I”, said the fly!Thanks for the beautiful poem, Sudhi; I couldn’t resist this reply… Happy New Year!
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