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    Haiku Sequence;

    Beachwalkers at Sunrise

    storm coming;
    batten down the hatches and send
    out your prayers!

    crossing the bridge;
    swollen autumn river
    lapping at our heels!

    waking abruptly;
    the roar of rushing winds a thing
    of my own body?

    small birds ebbing
    and flowing with the tide;
    beachwalkers at sunrise

    Dimitar
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    Rather than address your lines directly, Nico, I offer the following haiku sequence in response, which contain seeds of answers to the questions posited therein, at least imo.

    The sequence was inspired in part, by Akira Kurosawa’s 1950 film, Roshomon, which can be seen here; https://myflixerz.to/watch-movie/rashomon-80101.8313070

    The Winds of God

    among the ruins;
    even demons flee in fear
    of man’s ferocity!

    a bandit’s proposal –
    I’ll mend my evil ways
    if you’ll marry me!

    passing by
    the mountain of the dead,
    everything is silent

    an abandoned babe;
    I already have six,
    what’s one more?

    the winds of God;
    he who hears them becomes
    the hound of heaven!

     

    Dimitar
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    The Friend

    I’ve placed your feet
    upon the path;
    you only need to trust

    leave behind the world
    to be and do the
    things it must

    sing the song of love
    that lives deep within
    your heart

    and call upon me
    day and night for we are
    never apart

    Dimitar
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    Yesterday

    Yesterday seems so far away,
    In memories that lie deep.
    Silent like the falling snow,
    In a long and passionate sleep,
    Slowly moving in rhythmic flight,
    Into the mist and God’s surging tide,
    As a wisp of gold in the velvet night
    Where lies the dawn and it’s faded bride…

    Paul Twitchell; “Coins of Gold”

    Dimitar
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    This was a disturbing poem, especially as a parent, to write, based on a true story as it is (the image of the first verse happened literally as told). But… I remind myself that for those of us who would “take up the plough”, obeisance to the subject matter / truth, for the poet, is all important. We are bound to follow our muse wherever it may lead, and not necessarily question or falter when difficult subject matter calls. A further reference was a family I know, who lost their daughter in her prime, and the devastation her passing wrought.

    a child’s salty tears;
    more precious than any
    holy water!

    Father, Dear Father

    Father dear father,
    that seed you’ve sown;
    The sun, the soil
    and the rain will free it!
    In no time at all,
    that tree will be grown,
    But I won’t be
    here to see it.

    Son, my dear son,
    in your sweet springtime,
    The beat of my heart
    and the black of my eye;
    Who would deprive you
    of your unstained prime,
    And rob you of wings
    yet to taste sky?

    Father, dear father,
    ‘twould be cruel deceit,
    Were silence to remain
    falsely enthroned.
    And to regret forthwith,
    a further conceit;
    I cannot see farther
    than the eye has shown!

    Son, my dear son,
    be that as it may,
    Were deception a bedfellow
    I was able to bed.
    As sure as the darkness
    of night follows day,
    I would choose over anguish,
    To which I’m now wed!

    Father dear father,
    that seed you’ve sown,
    The sun, the soil
    and the rain will free it;
    In no time at all,
    that tree will be grown…
    But I won’t be
    here to see it!

    Saturday 15 02 2025

    Dimitar
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    Haiku Sequence

    Three New Kittens

    funeral march;
    the otherworldly drone
    of bagpipes

    down in the valley,
    an old sheep’s carcass –
    new life taking root

    late summer –
    pods of green peppers,
    slowly turning purple…

    tonight’s nocturne –
    rushing water breaks
    through a barrier!

    a carpenter hews wood,
    a mason, stone;
    I hew thin air!

    fields of floating hawks;
    when did I leave that world
    and enter this one?

    three new kittens –
    children clapping hands,
    way past their bedtime

    01 02 2025

    Dimitar
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    Haiku Sequence;

    Morning Parley

    fierce thunderclap –
    a dream scurrying away,
    never to return!

    living in mist;
    a pair of swallows huddling,
    not ready to fly away

    lovers embracing;
    last night’s tears forgotten
    (till next time)

    morning parley;
    my mantle of dewdrops for
    a sliver of golden light?

    28 01 2025

    Dimitar
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    “A thousand half-loves must be forsaken to take one whole heart home.”

    Rumi

    Dimitar
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    This re-post is in reply to the images of samurai posted above by AHH;

    A meditation on the “Way of the Warrior”. Events described are derived from the
    Genpei War – circa late 12th Century in Japan, and specifically, the fierce “Naval
    Battle of Dan-no-una” where the warring clans, the Minamato, aka the Genji, and
    the Taira (t-EH-ee-i-ra), aka the Heike, fought their final battle. With the Minamato
    triumph, the Shogun era (essentially military dictatorship) was ushered in to last for 700 years.

    https://www.artelino.com/articles/naval_battle_dannoura.asp

    The Way of the Warrior

    They fought like lions, paying their dues,
    With no place to flee and nothing to lose.
    Expecting no quarter, giving none in return –
    The way of the warrior, of fire interned!

    By noon that riptide had begun to relent,
    The fury of the Heike was all but spent;
    The drunken tiger lay on the seabed –
    His fleet in disarray, the Emperor dead!

    “A fortress I’ll build, a sturdy redoubt!”
    The Empress mother swore at her army’s pullout;
    “Where the mountain meets the waters that churn –
    At far Kobe we shall adjourn!”

    As night closed in on that battered old quay,
    A company of horsemen had gathered at the scree;
    Nestled in that bluff and surrounded by sea –
    That demon lay hobbled for all to see!

    When fire began to rain from above,
    The fates foreswore that labour of love;
    Neither rain, sleet nor hail could begin to quell,
    The flames that engulfed the citadel!

    The Taira elite once again stayed fate,
    Scooped up by their armada anchored in the strait;
    But the Genji and the Heike would once again meet,
    In the waters off Shikoku in dawn’s red heat!

    They fought like lions paying their dues,
    With nowhere to run and nothing to lose.
    Expecting no quarter, giving none in return –
    The way of the warrior, of fire interned!

    Holding him close in her watery descent,
    Through the bodies and the blood and the excrement;
    That jiji maddened and the boy foredoomed –
    His breath expelled, his life consumed!

    By noon that riptide had begun to relent,
    The fury of the Heike was all but spent;
    The drunken tiger lay on the seabed –
    His fleet in disarray, the young Emperor dead!

    As night closes in on those forced to flee,
    Ill omened or cited by destiny;
    A samurai true, when called to the task,
    Does not hesitate, nor does he ask…

    Drunken Tiger: samurais were referred to as drunken tigers, ie; drunk with righteousness (here referring to General Tomomori, who, mortally wounded, tied an anchor to his waist and lept overboard.

    jiji: an affectionate term for grandmother, referring to the Emporer, a boy of six, and the moment his grandmother committed them both to a watery grave, death being preferrable to shame.

    scree: a rubble of stones at the bottom of a cliff

    “That demon lay hobbled”:  this is a reference to the great fortress built by the Taira, “furrowed into a mountain and surrounded by sea”, which, in spite of a violent storm, lit up like a bonfire after the young general Yoshitsuné rained flaming arrows onto the fine woodwork of its rooves, ramparts etc.

    The final stanza refers to the great Minamato general, Yoshitsune, who, having bee the brilliant strategist behind the Minamato victory, was then condemned to death by his elder brother, Yoshitomo, to death. Yoshitomo would go on to become Shogun.

    Yoshitsune fled with his family, (he had taken a Taira noble as a wife, hence the decree from the Shogun), and, seeing no chance of escape, murdered his entire family, before committing hara-kiri himself. And all this before the age of thirty!

    I couldn’t resist adding this reply from ioan, not to aggrandize myself, but to hear his voice again;

    ioan; What a history poem, Dimitar… And your explanations as a crown to it…beautiful! Dimitar as I told you, you have a great talent, your poetry will be better and better.

     

     

    Dimitar
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    Come to Me, Love

    Come to me, love, I’ve hungered for you;
    All through the night and the morning, too.
    Through the afternoon haze and the call to prayer,
    My heart it is broken, my soul laid bare.

    Down in the compound, the mission bells ring.
    The angels they gather as the choir it sings.
    Remember Beloved, Thy guiding light;
    My eyes have been wounded, I’ve no longer sight.

    Come to me, love, wherever you roam,
    Come gather me up and carry me home;
    My knees have been hobbled, my body rent –
    I understand now all that you meant!

    Down in the town they’re weaving a thread;
    “Some faerie or demon ran off with his head!”
    Still others are saying, “He turned and he fled –
    He got cold feet on his way to be wed!”

    Come to me, love, I’ve hungered for you,
    All through the night and the daytime too.
    Remember Beloved, Thy loving care;
    My heart it is broken, my soul laid bare!

     

    Dimitar
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    The Contemplative

    the light of reason
    dispels the darkness of night
    enveloping soul

    mountains of passion;
    the heart must become as
    firm as a diamond!

    lopping off the branches
    and cutting through the roots
    of the tree of evil;
    the sword of wisdom!

    the contemplative;
    scattering the clouds that veil
    the celestial light of the moon

    neither gold nor jewels
    sway the man who is master
    of his destiny

     

    Dimitar
    Participant

    The Angel of Love Comes With a Sword

    O’ seeker,
    first the foothills
    and then the lofty heights!

    purge thy thoughts,
    and thy heart will follow
    and show you the way

    make love thy master,
    and unburden the soul
    of unwanted effects

    the truth within
    must be found and activated
    before miracles can occur

    create and live by
    thy own law, then live
    wholeheartedly!

    be sincere,
    for the Angel of Love
    comes with a sword!

    Dimitar
    Participant

    What Will It Be?

    what will it be;
    fear or love?
    it’s up to you!

    there are those who build
    and those who destroy;
    be a builder and not a destroyer!

    the golden heart;
    dispelling darkness as it
    lights the way for all

    the key to understanding
    the Spirit of Life; letting go
    and letting God!

    dreaming your dream;
    building the bridge to your outer world
    one day at a time

    an invisible summit
    on an invisible mountain,
    only you can see!

    healing depends
    upon the individual;
    how conscious is Soul?

    one with the one
    within the one; your atoms
    teach my atoms!

     

    Dimitar
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    washing the mountain,
    a colourless drizzling rain,
    summer haze

    awake yet asleep,
    a sequence of guttural croaks and caws;
    crows talking

    whitish clouds,
    brushed away by an infusion
    of stormy purples and greens

    black cormorant,
    alighting on spindly windswept trees,
    azure sea

    within my despair,
    a strange ebullience;
    capricious sky

    resplendent;
    a sea eagle circles high up above
    me and my concerns!

    Dimitar
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    and when,
    on that fateful day, the
    question had been posed
    to all of God’s creation, from
    the depths of mud and fire,
    to the arc of the Empyrean –
    “Who hast forgotten?”,
    a tiny voice spoke up;
    “Not I”, said the fly!

    Thanks for the beautiful poem, Sudhi; I couldn’t resist this reply… Happy New Year!

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