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    Jacob Collier; “Little Blue”

     

     

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    The Crow’s Lullaby

    “Mother crow, mother crow, why do you squawk so?
    There’s no mistaking your fear, your torment and woe,
    As I walk on by, way down here below;
    Mother crow, mother crow, why do you squawk so?”

    “Upon yonder mountain,” the mother crow sings;
    “I’ve seven cute children, behold my old nest;
    Good babies with big round eyes filled with zest,
    Upon yonder mountain,” the mother crow sings.

    “My wings are worn ragged, my beak torn to shreds,
    Seeking morsels in the shallows of the old river bed,
    ‘Neath the beech and the oak just to keep each one fed,
    My wings are worn ragged, my beak torn to shreds!”

    “Ne’er a moment of rest or a sliver of peace.
    If e’er I should find myself dispossessed,
    Of the ones that I loved, of the ones I’ve been blessed;
    Ne’er a moment of rest or a sliver of peace!

    What will I do when the raging storm breaks,
    When the wild winds they blow, and the floodwaters churn?
    Should my children be taken and never return;
    What will I do when the raging storm breaks?

    And where will I go, how will I hide,
    From the hawk on the high wind and the silent winged owl;
    How will I protect them from hunters on the prowl,
    Where will I go, and how will I hide?”

    “Upon yonder mountain,” the mother crow sings;
    “My round eyed good babies all seven you’ll see,
    You’ll then understand what it means to be me,
    Upon yonder mountain!” the mother crow sings.

    “Mother crow, mother crow, how you squawk so,
    There’s no mistaking your fear, your torment and woe.
    I now understand, way down here below…
    Mother crow, mother crow, why you squawk so!”

    18 04 2025

    Based on “The Crow’s Lullaby” (or sometimes “Nanatsu no Ko”), a Japanese children’s song that tells  the story of a mother crow’s concerns for her seven children.

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    The Breath of God

    the breath of God, should
    It touch our dreams, begins
    Soul’s transformation

    assembling Its destiny,
    Soul walks on hallowed ground
    each minute of the day!

    from endless possibilities;
    Soul creates Its reality through living
    Its wish fulfilled

    Soul must sacrifice
    the state of self-interest, in order
    to grow spiritually

    true humility
    is a servant of God,
    not of self

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    Love Song

    Good news, beloved, I bring to thee,
    Good news to make you glad;
    May your mountains reach the clouds above,
    Their misty peaks in rainbows clad.

    May your verdant forests cast their roots
    Deep into the earth, my dear;
    May no blade ever cut them down,
    And may their shade spread far and near.

    May your crystal clear waters run deep, my love,
    And may they never run dry!
    May your waters that flow like blood through the land
    Bring succour to earth and to sky.

    May your wings grow sturdy my dear sweetheart,
    To carry you above the world of pain.
    May they be strong enough to endure the sun
    And the endless storms of wind and rain.

    May your white horse never stumble and fall,
    May it bring you safely home to me;
    May you never bow to the tyrant, love;
    May your heart forever be free!

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    When the Gods created man they looked for a place to put Soul, so that the outer
    Man would not find It except through the toil of searching and growth. Finally, they put Soul in the heart of man, and ever since, man has been looking for, but not finding, the spark of God that he is.

    The Wars That You Wage

    Can you hear, can you hear,
    Can you hear the drums?
    The tide of pestilence
    Like fever spreads;
    The Devil’s hosts
    Spew forth like scum,
    Their banners soaked
    In the blood of the dead!

    What good is water
    To the cup that’s full?
    What good is light
    To the eye that’s blind?
    What good is wisdom
    To the ear stuffed with wool?
    What good is reason
    To the cruel and unkind?

    That frozen waste breeds
    Many a dark accord,
    When the wine of violence
    Makes drunkards of men;
    For the memory of summer
    Must first be restored,
    Before the return
    Of the winter wren.

    Look to thyself
    When the soul’s lost to view,
    For the giver of secrets
    Speaks to the heart.
    And when fate arrives
    You’ll know what to do,
    To accept in full
    What you see now in part.

    And so tread lightly
    Through plague stricken land,
    Where every abscess must
    Be cleaned, cut and drained.
    For those in distress
    Must come to understand,
    That illness and disquiet
    Are by themselves preordained…

    Can you hear, can you hear
    Can you hear the drums?
    Oceans will rise and
    Mountains will fall!
    The veil will be lifted
    When the time comes,
    And the wars that you wage
    End once and for all.

    06 03 2025

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    Haiku Sequence

    What is Life?

    first frost;
    brown wisps of grass peeking out
    from behind a cedar fence post

    reaching heavenward;
    white smoke from the chimney
    of a distant farmhouse

    tracing eternity;
    tiny mice trails soon to disappear
    under the snow

    sudden squeal of brakes –
    the local schoolbus sliding
    sideways on ice

    a kitten startled
    by its reflection in a mirror –
    not yet a cat!

    afterward;
    pale misty trails on tangled limbs,
    the wandering moon

     

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    You and I

    I am the scour
    of the tide, you are my
    masterpiece in progress

    I am the idea,
    you are the ever seeking
    but never finding tongue

    I am the flame,
    you are the untempered
    and wild madness

    I am the goldsmith,
    you are the malleable
    and noble gold

    I am the song
    unsung, you are the sweetly
    singing bird

    I am the ocean,
    you are the shore where time
    and eternity meet!

     

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    Haiku Sequence;

    Beachwalkers at Sunrise

    storm coming;
    batten down the hatches and send
    out your prayers!

    crossing the bridge;
    swollen autumn river
    lapping at our heels!

    waking abruptly;
    the roar of rushing winds a thing
    of my own body?

    small birds ebbing
    and flowing with the tide;
    beachwalkers at sunrise

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    Rather than address your lines directly, Nico, I offer the following haiku sequence in response, which contain seeds of answers to the questions posited therein, at least imo.

    The sequence was inspired in part, by Akira Kurosawa’s 1950 film, Roshomon, which can be seen here; https://myflixerz.to/watch-movie/rashomon-80101.8313070

    The Winds of God

    among the ruins;
    even demons flee in fear
    of man’s ferocity!

    a bandit’s proposal –
    I’ll mend my evil ways
    if you’ll marry me!

    passing by
    the mountain of the dead,
    everything is silent

    an abandoned babe;
    I already have six,
    what’s one more?

    the winds of God;
    he who hears them becomes
    the hound of heaven!

     

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    The Friend

    I’ve placed your feet
    upon the path;
    you only need to trust

    leave behind the world
    to be and do the
    things it must

    sing the song of love
    that lives deep within
    your heart

    and call upon me
    day and night for we are
    never apart

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    Yesterday

    Yesterday seems so far away,
    In memories that lie deep.
    Silent like the falling snow,
    In a long and passionate sleep,
    Slowly moving in rhythmic flight,
    Into the mist and God’s surging tide,
    As a wisp of gold in the velvet night
    Where lies the dawn and it’s faded bride…

    Paul Twitchell; “Coins of Gold”

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    This was a disturbing poem, especially as a parent, to write, based on a true story as it is (the image of the first verse happened literally as told). But… I remind myself that for those of us who would “take up the plough”, obeisance to the subject matter / truth, for the poet, is all important. We are bound to follow our muse wherever it may lead, and not necessarily question or falter when difficult subject matter calls. A further reference was a family I know, who lost their daughter in her prime, and the devastation her passing wrought.

    a child’s salty tears;
    more precious than any
    holy water!

    Father, Dear Father

    Father dear father,
    that seed you’ve sown;
    The sun, the soil
    and the rain will free it!
    In no time at all,
    that tree will be grown,
    But I won’t be
    here to see it.

    Son, my dear son,
    in your sweet springtime,
    The beat of my heart
    and the black of my eye;
    Who would deprive you
    of your unstained prime,
    And rob you of wings
    yet to taste sky?

    Father, dear father,
    ‘twould be cruel deceit,
    Were silence to remain
    falsely enthroned.
    And to regret forthwith,
    a further conceit;
    I cannot see farther
    than the eye has shown!

    Son, my dear son,
    be that as it may,
    Were deception a bedfellow
    I was able to bed.
    As sure as the darkness
    of night follows day,
    I would choose over anguish,
    To which I’m now wed!

    Father dear father,
    that seed you’ve sown,
    The sun, the soil
    and the rain will free it;
    In no time at all,
    that tree will be grown…
    But I won’t be
    here to see it!

    Saturday 15 02 2025

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    Haiku Sequence

    Three New Kittens

    funeral march;
    the otherworldly drone
    of bagpipes

    down in the valley,
    an old sheep’s carcass –
    new life taking root

    late summer –
    pods of green peppers,
    slowly turning purple…

    tonight’s nocturne –
    rushing water breaks
    through a barrier!

    a carpenter hews wood,
    a mason, stone;
    I hew thin air!

    fields of floating hawks;
    when did I leave that world
    and enter this one?

    three new kittens –
    children clapping hands,
    way past their bedtime

    01 02 2025

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    Haiku Sequence;

    Morning Parley

    fierce thunderclap –
    a dream scurrying away,
    never to return!

    living in mist;
    a pair of swallows huddling,
    not ready to fly away

    lovers embracing;
    last night’s tears forgotten
    (till next time)

    morning parley;
    my mantle of dewdrops for
    a sliver of golden light?

    28 01 2025

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    “A thousand half-loves must be forsaken to take one whole heart home.”

    Rumi

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